Is this a good poem to give your girlfriend?

Kyle

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Beautiful is one word
Gorgeous is also true
Pretty, amazing, incredible
Words can’t tell how much I love you

Butterflies are created
Every time I kiss you
My smile grows
Every time I am near you

Holding your hand
Or holding your hips
I feel my heart pumping
All the way to my fingertips

Laying with you
And looking in your eyes
Stroking the palm of your hand
You make me feel alive

I want the bond to last
I want you more than ever
For the first time in my life
A girl makes my life better

you is special in every way
Just being close to you is amazing
To hold you in my arms makes me realize
That my love for you is never fading

i wrote it so please give me your honest opinion :) thank you
 
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