Is this a good poem? If so, how did you come to that decision? If not, how can I

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improve it? Looking at the ocean
Smelling the sweet smell of salt
Listening to the waves crash against the rocks
Thinking of the fish
Wishing I could be one


This isn't all, but I forgot the rest of it. It's saved in my school's computers.
 
Its very descriptive which is very good, I think it would be better if all of it was there. But its not bad.
 
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