Is this a good poem for my English project?

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Not sure if it's in the correct verse manner but here is what I have-

Money in my jeans, sweet azz honey on my arm.
The sky is bright and sunny.
Don't drive over the lil bunny! ERRRRR!

My nose is getting-getting runny.
Just unpack your shiznit and your gunny.
Silly bizotch, cheesily, we really gots to be gettin',

He'll ribs him, 'til kids win, tell OJ Simpson.
Call up Ludicrous - he be doin' this azz.
Jumpin' hurdles - flippin' gerbils.

Who's gunna test this - goose for breakfast
The tightest azz on the planet - the hypest --don't panic!
Listen to that -[whisper] stick in your back - hit you so fast

Rhyming words - flying herds - mining for turds.
Real gentle stillness - severe mental illness!
Incomplete - sink and weep - toilet seat
I showed some of it to my teacher and she laughed...I mean, it isn't supposed to be a song/ rap but okay......
 
Maybe if it was a rapping english class lol. Try something more deep about a personal experience that might work better.
 
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