Is this a good poem bout my girlfriend?

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Patrick

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Danielle is my life
could be my future wife
beautiful in every way
glad i see her almost every day
i love her with all my heart
like a kid in a shopping cart
we hang out in school
yea its kinda kool
we have a class together
i wish it last forever
Danielle i love you
I hope you love me 2



do u like it...u think she will..what could i call it
anyway yall think it could b bttr
 
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