is this a good part to start the beginning of my book!?

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im writing a book about how life can be hard and
how love can be pain without the support you
wish you had its mostly about a young girl
who wish that she had everything........


its a drama romance book''


i didn't know how life can be so difficult itself the pain
that make my heart beat faster and faster i watch my parent
as they past by in front of me i wanted to show them how much pain i was in i hide my feelings as i put on a fake smile i can see how mad they were when they left the house i ran inside and went straight to my room and slam the door i felt a tear drop fall i started to cry more
i heard the phone ring but i didn't have the courage to answer it i know it was my teacher Mr park that told my parents i lie about going to school how i lie about not having a boyfriend...........to be continued


is it a good part or should i write somethig better
don't put stupid answers thank you..
 
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