KingBrian94
New member
Well this is my sonnet and I wanted some critiques so here it is...
Is love nothing more than a fantasy?
For I do not know, so now I wonder
Is it emotion or ability?
Tis the question over which I ponder.
We are young and thus love is confusing,
Will it ever be clear or our savior?
Maybe we are just fearful of losing.
Even we cannot tell from behavior.
Yet, for I am sure that words cannot describe
What is true, which is how I think of you.
This will never end and nor will the vibe.
Now I am settled, for the sky is blue.
Let us take this chance and then be happy.
Thou shall have and reveal the best in me.
Please only constructive criticism...please and thanks
Is love nothing more than a fantasy?
For I do not know, so now I wonder
Is it emotion or ability?
Tis the question over which I ponder.
We are young and thus love is confusing,
Will it ever be clear or our savior?
Maybe we are just fearful of losing.
Even we cannot tell from behavior.
Yet, for I am sure that words cannot describe
What is true, which is how I think of you.
This will never end and nor will the vibe.
Now I am settled, for the sky is blue.
Let us take this chance and then be happy.
Thou shall have and reveal the best in me.
Please only constructive criticism...please and thanks