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Here's some of it I've already did
Kevin" was a 13 year old boy in the 8th grade with his brownish/blondish hair and his sparkled green eyes and his charming smile.He was new this year at this school called "West Point Way"he didn't have a clue what to do at first since he was new.Then when he walked into his class the teacher said."Sit down students its almost 5 minutes until class and you wouldn't want to miss this its going to be interesting to day."Great" Kevin said with a funny look on his face as the only seat left was the one on the 5th row as other students wrote on it drew on it.Then he looked and thought "its just a seat with the number 13 written on it"! What could be wrong? Then some short kid named "Trevor" said to "Kevin you know dude the last kid that sat in that seat died because they say that its haunted I know funny right man? But the truth is it happened when this school first opened back in 1952 they said his name was Jimmy Scanter don't ask why his last name is that! No one can figure it out still just be safe dude! Then Kevin" thought for a minute he said ha like this is haunted? Then "Kevin asked Trevor again"Why is the number 13 written on this desk? Then Trevor answered very quickly why because Jimmy Scanter died when he was only 13 and they say his ghost still sits there hard to believe right man? Then if you listen carefully you can here his ghost say 13 sometimes its creepy man just be careful now we gotta shut up because the teacher is coming back! Then after school let out Kevin took a walk in the park to clear his mind of things then he grabbed his book bag and climbed to the top of the tree house in the park to get his homework done before his parents get home with dinner.He thought since its almost near Halloween time that Trevor was just trying to scare him with an early trick just to scare him."But then he thought is it really true or just a trick?
OK That is all I got to is it good so far? What should/could I add to it?
What should i call it? i cannot think of a name?
Thanks I'm going to work on it better its going to kinda be like a Goosebumps story
Kevin" was a 13 year old boy in the 8th grade with his brownish/blondish hair and his sparkled green eyes and his charming smile.He was new this year at this school called "West Point Way"he didn't have a clue what to do at first since he was new.Then when he walked into his class the teacher said."Sit down students its almost 5 minutes until class and you wouldn't want to miss this its going to be interesting to day."Great" Kevin said with a funny look on his face as the only seat left was the one on the 5th row as other students wrote on it drew on it.Then he looked and thought "its just a seat with the number 13 written on it"! What could be wrong? Then some short kid named "Trevor" said to "Kevin you know dude the last kid that sat in that seat died because they say that its haunted I know funny right man? But the truth is it happened when this school first opened back in 1952 they said his name was Jimmy Scanter don't ask why his last name is that! No one can figure it out still just be safe dude! Then Kevin" thought for a minute he said ha like this is haunted? Then "Kevin asked Trevor again"Why is the number 13 written on this desk? Then Trevor answered very quickly why because Jimmy Scanter died when he was only 13 and they say his ghost still sits there hard to believe right man? Then if you listen carefully you can here his ghost say 13 sometimes its creepy man just be careful now we gotta shut up because the teacher is coming back! Then after school let out Kevin took a walk in the park to clear his mind of things then he grabbed his book bag and climbed to the top of the tree house in the park to get his homework done before his parents get home with dinner.He thought since its almost near Halloween time that Trevor was just trying to scare him with an early trick just to scare him."But then he thought is it really true or just a trick?
OK That is all I got to is it good so far? What should/could I add to it?
What should i call it? i cannot think of a name?
Thanks I'm going to work on it better its going to kinda be like a Goosebumps story