I'm taking poetry courses because I thought it would get my creativity in lyric writing. You know, like using better vocabulary, rhythms, and such.
The outline for the poem is 3 stanzas. In the first stanza there are 5 verses. 3 verses in the second. And 3 in the last. The chorus is in between every stanza.
We had to choose three events that tied together. And the chorus is what ties it together. I thought maybe speaking from my own experiences that maybe it would be better.
I was wondering if you found these something you could see in poetry: the first is about being evicted, the second is of the murder of my closest friend, and the third was about losing everything I had. The idea is that I've always found a way to get back on my feet again. And there was always something, although I was never exactly positive what, that helped me through the worst of times (which I explain as God's help in the poem).
There is no direct telling of what each event is, but you can piece the puzzles together so that it's like working with a mystery.
I would post it... but I don't trust that it'll be credited as mine in the morning.
So what do you think about the idea of the poem? Do you think it will have any impact?
The outline for the poem is 3 stanzas. In the first stanza there are 5 verses. 3 verses in the second. And 3 in the last. The chorus is in between every stanza.
We had to choose three events that tied together. And the chorus is what ties it together. I thought maybe speaking from my own experiences that maybe it would be better.
I was wondering if you found these something you could see in poetry: the first is about being evicted, the second is of the murder of my closest friend, and the third was about losing everything I had. The idea is that I've always found a way to get back on my feet again. And there was always something, although I was never exactly positive what, that helped me through the worst of times (which I explain as God's help in the poem).
There is no direct telling of what each event is, but you can piece the puzzles together so that it's like working with a mystery.
I would post it... but I don't trust that it'll be credited as mine in the morning.
So what do you think about the idea of the poem? Do you think it will have any impact?