is this a good emo poem?

[Lanakinz]

please help me if anything needs to be added tell me anything needs to be editing tell me.



as i pack
The color black
My misery flows right through my death
but just for now im cutting myself
oh how i love the blood
when it dripps in the mudd

 

[Jojobean]

Emo used to be a good genre of music...ever since dashboard conffessional people like you ruined it. Emo never used to be black,hate my life blah blah....Emo used to be nerds in sweater vests writing poetry above love; not self hatred...in otherwords your "EMO" poem sucks.

 

[dhms forever!]

i just want to give one advice:
a good poem always comes from within ur heart, so always follow ur heart.its always right

 

[Rebecca]

Short, but pretty good poem ya got there'!

 

[Keira the cat]

YOU EMO!!!

 

[Jegged]

It's a trick question, there is no such thing as a good emo poem.

 

[partlycloudy493]

pshh no. Are you even emo? I'm gonna have to say HELLZ NO. Honey, that isn't even close. It's superficial, unemotional, and stereotypical.

 

[ColdBlue]

im sorry that is actually shit. back to the drawing board.

P.S when you have walked in on someone who has slit their wrists and there is blood all over the walls and you have to call there parents to explain in fact their son has taken his life, and you have to call the police it wont seem so cool.