Is this a good descriptive poem?

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the poem is about the birth of a child

drop in the ear
and everlasting melody
a beating hearts shatters glass
a smile is cast
the world is blind, afresh
a blazing scream
kindles winter into spring
a mountain glides
by the thought of love
a lightning crashes
pristine eyes ignite
 
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