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Imagine the feeling you get when you here your favorite sports team wins the top of their division.Do you feel proud and gladly say you are a fan? Well imagine if your favorite team had the best record of all time. you could then brag to all your friends, of you like these things,imagine yourself as a Yankees fan.
The Rivalry of the New york Yankees and the Boston red sox started in the twentieth century.It'a rivalry that has been going on
for the last hundred years. The first time these teams squared off was in 1901.After Babe Ruth was traded to the New York he cursed the Boston Red Sox which is believed to be the reason why they didn't win a world series game for eighty six years. and the yankees when on to win 26 world series titlesRed Sox have won 7 times to date .
The curse was broken in 2004 when the Red Sox finally won the world seires.The new York Yankees have the best record in baseball history and this season proves that.The Yankees rank 13.15, higher than the Boston
Red Sox this year
This season the Average runs for the
New York Yankees is 2.84 and the Boston Red Sox is only 2.69 with 1551 home Runs
also belong to the Yankees.
The Yankees batting average this seanson is 5457 while the Red Sox average is
5321.The Yankees average is 2nd in the Major League Statistics. Three places above the
Red Sox. Yankee player Robinson Cano and Derek Jeter Are ranked the 3rd and 4th place
average batters.
They are also 2nd and 3rd top hitters. .over all for the Yankees are three places higher than the Red Sox
The Yankees have won 19 more World
Series games than the Red Sox.
we have to use these steps Get the attention of your audience using a detailed story, shocking example, dramatic statistic, quotations, etc.
Need
Show that the problem about which you are speaking exists, that it is significant, and that it won't go away by itself. Use statistics, examples, etc. Convince your audience that there is a need for action to be taken.
Satisfy
You need to solve the issue. Provide specific and viable solutions that the government or communities can implement to solve the problem.
Visualization
Tell the audience what will happen if the solution is implemented or does not take place. Be visual and detailed.
Action
Tell the audience what action they can take personally to solve the problem.
For instance, a more generalized format may be:
Monroe’s Motivation Sequence
1. Attention: Hey! Listen to me, I have a PROBLEM!
2. Need: Let me EXPLAIN the problem.
3. Satisfy: But, I have a SOLUTION!
4. Visualization: If we IMPLEMENT my solution, this is what will happen.
5. Action: You can help me in this specific way. Are YOU willing to help me?
The advantage of Motivated Sequence is that it emphasizes what the audience can do. Too often the audience feels like a situation is hopeless; Monroe's motivated sequence emphasizes the action the audience can take
it has to last me 5 minutes
The Rivalry of the New york Yankees and the Boston red sox started in the twentieth century.It'a rivalry that has been going on
for the last hundred years. The first time these teams squared off was in 1901.After Babe Ruth was traded to the New York he cursed the Boston Red Sox which is believed to be the reason why they didn't win a world series game for eighty six years. and the yankees when on to win 26 world series titlesRed Sox have won 7 times to date .
The curse was broken in 2004 when the Red Sox finally won the world seires.The new York Yankees have the best record in baseball history and this season proves that.The Yankees rank 13.15, higher than the Boston
Red Sox this year
This season the Average runs for the
New York Yankees is 2.84 and the Boston Red Sox is only 2.69 with 1551 home Runs
also belong to the Yankees.
The Yankees batting average this seanson is 5457 while the Red Sox average is
5321.The Yankees average is 2nd in the Major League Statistics. Three places above the
Red Sox. Yankee player Robinson Cano and Derek Jeter Are ranked the 3rd and 4th place
average batters.
They are also 2nd and 3rd top hitters. .over all for the Yankees are three places higher than the Red Sox
The Yankees have won 19 more World
Series games than the Red Sox.
we have to use these steps Get the attention of your audience using a detailed story, shocking example, dramatic statistic, quotations, etc.
Need
Show that the problem about which you are speaking exists, that it is significant, and that it won't go away by itself. Use statistics, examples, etc. Convince your audience that there is a need for action to be taken.
Satisfy
You need to solve the issue. Provide specific and viable solutions that the government or communities can implement to solve the problem.
Visualization
Tell the audience what will happen if the solution is implemented or does not take place. Be visual and detailed.
Action
Tell the audience what action they can take personally to solve the problem.
For instance, a more generalized format may be:
Monroe’s Motivation Sequence
1. Attention: Hey! Listen to me, I have a PROBLEM!
2. Need: Let me EXPLAIN the problem.
3. Satisfy: But, I have a SOLUTION!
4. Visualization: If we IMPLEMENT my solution, this is what will happen.
5. Action: You can help me in this specific way. Are YOU willing to help me?
The advantage of Motivated Sequence is that it emphasizes what the audience can do. Too often the audience feels like a situation is hopeless; Monroe's motivated sequence emphasizes the action the audience can take
it has to last me 5 minutes