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yakob555
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ok so I'm 12 and im writing a book.. so tell me if you think its good.
So theres a kid (Connor Huxford) and he has moved to different states 4 times in his life. He Moves to Seattle Washington and Starts his first day of middle school. on the first day of school he sees a girl that he thinks is very beautiful. So they become friends. and the guy likes the girl. But than he moves away. And its all about all the things the guy and the girl do together. like go to the Space Needle and stuff. And every chapter it switches off from first person in the guys point of view, to first person in the girls point of view.
So theres a kid (Connor Huxford) and he has moved to different states 4 times in his life. He Moves to Seattle Washington and Starts his first day of middle school. on the first day of school he sees a girl that he thinks is very beautiful. So they become friends. and the guy likes the girl. But than he moves away. And its all about all the things the guy and the girl do together. like go to the Space Needle and stuff. And every chapter it switches off from first person in the guys point of view, to first person in the girls point of view.