(Capitals are supposed to be italics.)
Here's one:
Can you keep a secret?
A secret that could easily bring you the best things in the world...
...or blow up in your face...
...or could finally give you what you always wanted SO badly?
A secret that could make you ruler of the world, in the blink of an eye?
Can you keep MY secret?
Here's two:
Nella is a M'ored, an element-controlling, swift and breathtakingly beautiful killing machine. Her daily life consists of hunting down & destroying the monsters that call themselves "immortals". She used to do it just for fun, but now...
...now she has a better reason.
Have you ever felt like someone is watching you?
She knows who.
Has a chill ever ran down your spine?
She knows why.
Have you ever been afraid?
You should be.
These are the things that you put on the back of a book, y'know? XD
Which one hooks you more? (BTW these are for different stories)
All comments appreciated
Here's one:
Can you keep a secret?
A secret that could easily bring you the best things in the world...
...or blow up in your face...
...or could finally give you what you always wanted SO badly?
A secret that could make you ruler of the world, in the blink of an eye?
Can you keep MY secret?
Here's two:
Nella is a M'ored, an element-controlling, swift and breathtakingly beautiful killing machine. Her daily life consists of hunting down & destroying the monsters that call themselves "immortals". She used to do it just for fun, but now...
...now she has a better reason.
Have you ever felt like someone is watching you?
She knows who.
Has a chill ever ran down your spine?
She knows why.
Have you ever been afraid?
You should be.
These are the things that you put on the back of a book, y'know? XD
Which one hooks you more? (BTW these are for different stories)
All comments appreciated