Beth Gemmell
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THIS is actually the first try for a blurb. Written down (typed down in this case), rather. So, considering it's its first time on any kind of writing (or typing) material, I accept criticisms or comments..
And whether or not it sounds interesting....
"She's not sure why her father is being hunted. She's got no clue why the Spirit World is being forced to break. She's got no idea what is trapped inside the Void. However, she understand this: The people looking for her father are blood-thirsty; she understands that the Spirit World is what keeps her world from falling apart; and she learns that the thing inside the Void has not been seen or spoken for eleven years. Her bar's burnt down, she has three children with her and the person who set fire to her bar is the most dangerous man alive. And he's hot on her trail."
Yeaaaaah, bad methinks and it drags on.... but meh. Whaddya think?
.. and be brutal.
And whether or not it sounds interesting....
"She's not sure why her father is being hunted. She's got no clue why the Spirit World is being forced to break. She's got no idea what is trapped inside the Void. However, she understand this: The people looking for her father are blood-thirsty; she understands that the Spirit World is what keeps her world from falling apart; and she learns that the thing inside the Void has not been seen or spoken for eleven years. Her bar's burnt down, she has three children with her and the person who set fire to her bar is the most dangerous man alive. And he's hot on her trail."
Yeaaaaah, bad methinks and it drags on.... but meh. Whaddya think?
.. and be brutal.