Is the punctuation on this sentence correct?

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Throughout my career, and continuing education, I’ve received an additional 4,990 hours of training and certification, in an effort to advance my career.

Or is this correct?

Throughout my career, and continuing education, I’ve received an additional 4,990 hours of training and certification; in an effort to advance my career.


I know I should know this, but I've been up all night on a project for work, and my brain hurts.
 
I think this is the correct punctuation:

Throughout my career and continuing education, I’ve received an additional 4,990 hours of training and certification in an effort to advance my career.

There aren't as many commas as you think.
 
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