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im only 16 and i plan to make a short book of my poems before i turn 17. i'll give a sample of an "emo poem" and a poem about miracles. is it good enough to be read by others or published? i hope you can give your comments and suggestions. ^_^ thanks! God Bless
Sorrow, An Indescribable Feeling...
A pure heart.
A shattered soul
An aiming dart.
Pain with no control.
A humble smile.
A silent cry.
A walk for miles.
But you don’t know why.
A hidden desire.
A forgotten memory.
A wing on fire.
A soul in reverie.
An ending line
A finishing page
A forgotten rhyme
A shadowed age
Miracles
Miracles are just splendid gifts
That are given from above
In times we spend in quiet
We share God’s awesome love
And when we say a kind word
Or say a simple prayer
We feel so warm and happy
For God is always there
Miracles are everywhere
Just believe and you will see
That they come in all sizes
They are gifts for you and me
And just be grateful for the times
When you don’t understand
He’ll come and give a miracle
He’ll reach out and stretch His hand
Sorrow, An Indescribable Feeling...
A pure heart.
A shattered soul
An aiming dart.
Pain with no control.
A humble smile.
A silent cry.
A walk for miles.
But you don’t know why.
A hidden desire.
A forgotten memory.
A wing on fire.
A soul in reverie.
An ending line
A finishing page
A forgotten rhyme
A shadowed age
Miracles
Miracles are just splendid gifts
That are given from above
In times we spend in quiet
We share God’s awesome love
And when we say a kind word
Or say a simple prayer
We feel so warm and happy
For God is always there
Miracles are everywhere
Just believe and you will see
That they come in all sizes
They are gifts for you and me
And just be grateful for the times
When you don’t understand
He’ll come and give a miracle
He’ll reach out and stretch His hand