Is my story any good?

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Here's Chapt. 2. Please don't be mean

After about 30 minutes of walking through the woods we came to a clearing.
"Ok, just a little further." You didn't seem tired at all!
We crossed the street and walked a little further, I was exausted!
Finaly we came to my house, we ran directly to the barn that served as our hideout.
When we got to the barn you pulled a rope that let down an old rope ladder.
"After you." You held the ladder tight so it wouldn't swing.
When I got in you followed and pulled the ladder up behind you.
"Ok, now what?" I giggled, I loved the feeling of danger that always came when we were together.
"Well...How about a nap? I'm tired!" You laughed and layed down in the hay.
I layed down in a pile of hay near you.
Then, without any warning, you grabed my hand and just held it.
Your hand was warm, and rough from working with the horses. I had no clue why you did that but I was too scared that you'd let go to ask. We layed there, hand in hand, for half an hour. Then you sat up, still holding my hand, and asked "Do you want to go pet the horses?"
"Ok, lets go!" I tried to sound really enthused, but really I just wanted to stay and keep holding hands.
"Whats wrong?" You let go of my hand.
"Nothing! I want to go pet the horses!"
"No, theres something wrong." You could always read me like a book.
"Why did you hold my hand like that?" I blurted out.
"Um...because...I...I don't know!" You blushed and turned to let the ladder down.
"Yes you do! Why won't you tell me?" I was hurt that you would keep a secret from me.
"I...I think...I think I like you!" You blurted out the last part. I was confused.
"We're friends, why wouldn't you like me?"
"No. Not that kind of like. I mean like...I like you as more than a friend." Your cheeks were bright red.
"More than a friend?" I still didn't get it.
"Like boyfriend and girlfriend."
"OH!" I was stunned. How could he like me that way? Do I feel the same way?
"Do...do you like me too?"
"Y...yes..." I was as red as a cherry.
You were obviously very happy, I was too.


(BY THE WAY, INCASE YOU COULDN'T TELL THESE ARE LIL KIDS, NOT TEENS OR ADULTS)
 
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