Hershey Kiss
New member
I look as all the world and speak in song
my feet in snow, my cheeks of candy red
leaving spirit, correcting those of wrong
to seek family, and put greed to bed
to some, im filled by worthless objects
to cover up the missing, love and time
the king celebrate, not his subjects
snow, covers the world, smaller than a dime
flakes, like me, none alike, unique, some melt
into far away memories,
ITS NOT DONE, SO IF YOU HAVE ANY IDEAS YOU ARE WELCOME TO SHARE. IS IT IN AIMBIC METTER?? AND OENTAMETTER?? IF NOT, WHAT LINES ARE NO IN THE PATTER AND HOW CAN I CHANGE THEM??
my feet in snow, my cheeks of candy red
leaving spirit, correcting those of wrong
to seek family, and put greed to bed
to some, im filled by worthless objects
to cover up the missing, love and time
the king celebrate, not his subjects
snow, covers the world, smaller than a dime
flakes, like me, none alike, unique, some melt
into far away memories,
ITS NOT DONE, SO IF YOU HAVE ANY IDEAS YOU ARE WELCOME TO SHARE. IS IT IN AIMBIC METTER?? AND OENTAMETTER?? IF NOT, WHAT LINES ARE NO IN THE PATTER AND HOW CAN I CHANGE THEM??