MarissaRave
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I need some opinions about my sonnet for Honors English. It has to be in iambic pentameter and all that. but i don't know if it's right.
any ways to make this better? It is about me falling for my best friend, but he doesn't know it.
You and I have always been friends
Always joking, smiling, clowning
But it seems our hearts will never mend
And it seems to leave me frowning
Wanting to know if you feel this too.
My heart was only always half full,
Until that very moment I met you.
My heart is in a never-ending duel.
I wish that I could shake this feeling away,
You leave me hanging by a thin line,
But I love you more each and every day.
Will you tell me if I’m wasting time?
Our friendship is like a precious gold,
But these games you play are getting old.
any ways to make this better? It is about me falling for my best friend, but he doesn't know it.
You and I have always been friends
Always joking, smiling, clowning
But it seems our hearts will never mend
And it seems to leave me frowning
Wanting to know if you feel this too.
My heart was only always half full,
Until that very moment I met you.
My heart is in a never-ending duel.
I wish that I could shake this feeling away,
You leave me hanging by a thin line,
But I love you more each and every day.
Will you tell me if I’m wasting time?
Our friendship is like a precious gold,
But these games you play are getting old.