Is my song I wrote any good?

Streetballer3

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So i wrote this in about 20 mins...Picture a boys like girls (on top of the world),metro station or sick puppies type sound...

Lights fade, I say, man what happenend to us.

Well, I cry at night when I try and sleep but your all I can think of babe.

You told me that you loved me but you couldn't do it anymore.

So I keep on just to hear your voice or see your face

I really don't care just as long has your always there.

You left, said you would be back but I never saw you again,

atleast only in my dreams. So lets not start it again?

Your friends dont matter to me because all I want is to to be free

and to see you again, my dear.



[CHORUS] So i'll see you in my dreams. We can be together and no one will hold us back.

We could get away, go away far, far away from this world. Just you and me

as long has we are together is all that matters to me so all see you darling

see you...In my dreams...[CHORUS]



I remember the lights fading out, I remember the sound of you calling out

telling me that you were around but you sounded strange...

I replay it over and over in my head hoping I can get over you but I can't

because deep down you left a scar not really seeming to care.

Oh yeah well I remember everytime we kissed all those times you looked at me and

I swear that was day that I decided you were the one but you didn't believe me.

You said you needed time and that was the last I saw of you, but I keep telling myself...



[CHORUS] That i'll see you in my dreams. We can be together and no one will hold us back.

We could get away, go away far, far away from this world. Just you and me

as long has we are together is all that matters to me so all see you darling

see you...In my dreams...[CHORUS]



"(FAINT) (X3) See you.....see you in my dreams...(X3)
 
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