Is my poetry any good?

S

Stephen

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Though our friendship has not been forever
not months not years
not through countless adventures
we still have a bond that will never Severe

If we tried then we could be closer then blood
Like Family
whether it be brother or sister or cousin
our friendship will bud

Like a flower in a field
But the difference is this
All the flowers there are daisies
but growing there is a rose with an unbeatable shield

We haven't been through much
As both of us can see
but something is different
Between you and me

Though its not love
or happiness
or glee
is still something great
greater then the ground the air and all of the above

Ode to a friend is quite a nice story
To be told in familys like we
but this storys different
not passed by father to son
but friend to friend
as it leaves to the mouths of the children


Please reply =]
 
don't ask us if your poetry is good - write to share what you feel not to impress - as for the poem itself, it can be improved, there are a few grammar mistakes but that's okay 'cause with practice that'll go away - try out diff forms too

good luck :)
 
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