is my poetry any good? never wrote any before and thought id take a crack at it....?

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pathetic.
loser.
pathetic.
loser.
the water talks in drops
pathetic.
loser.
i take a breath
my head goes under
drowning
in a sea of oh why me's
pathetic.
loser.







in case you didnt get it, its simple someone in a bath water dripping. each drop he hears it saying pathetic loser, so he sticks his head under but still hears it.
 
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