is my poetry any good? im 12?

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im 12 and ever sense i was little i love things that have to do with writing it just comes to me and i don't no why? is it any good i want to no truly what you think? here's one:


the time we used to have are together now...there can be know one to stop and to go...the father we walk the longer we'll flow...do not worry my darling dear we have other and the earth will Always be near.... 2th poem don't be afraid im here don't worry...the grass grows long but the waves do not hurry...they have there own pattern...no time may pass....but here you go just cowering over your pity...just say your forgiveness and get on going and don't come back until your done with your worrying....im tired of taking charge no happiness no fun for me all i get is here there and so fresh ground Hunny..just leave i will never rretrievethey way you left was ppathetically...
3rd hurry hurry we have no time don'trush me all i have is time...your reretardedour weird i don'tc e where we go...i just was to fly just flee just disadisappearlthough my wish dosedoesn'tpen as i feared..im just stuck intiin-tillready and old to leave...intill then i can not retrive... thanks so much i hope you enjoyed these are my poems they have no meaning there very strange have a mning it all depends on you and your inmagining.
im sorry its mispelled a lot i tryed the spell checker on here and it mest it all upthe first one is farther we walk, the second one is i will never retrive the way you left was patheticly. 3,retarded weried i dont care,just dispear though my wish dosent come true as i feared, intill im ready the thanks so much part is strange but they do have meanings
 
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