Is my poem I wrote good?

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I wrote this poem about homelessness for my 12th grade english class. Please let me know if it is good or if I should change some things. Thanks


Why should it be like this
Nothing to do but reminisce
In a stairwell, almost dead
No life to look forward to ahead
Sitting here with no possesions
Asking myself a million questions
Wheres my family? Wheres my home?
Nothing to do but search and roam
Im homeless now and all alone
I wish I could just have a place of my own
I do not like the last 2 lines but I couldnt think of anything else to put there.
Thank you everyone for you advice
:)
 
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