Is my poem good? (please don't copy)?

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FRUSTRATION
I hate you
you hag
you're the worst person ever
why you
and not someone else?

Get out of my life
just leave me alone
you're more like a monster than a brother

I won't sit on your lap
I'm not your little girl
no piggy tails and sandals
there's makeup and attitude
cause I'm big now

Get away from my room
I don't want to play
I have homework
and don't touch that stuff!







I come home from school
I'm crying
then mum hugs me
and everything is
okay.




It is free verse poetry
 
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