Is my poem good or bad? Please!?

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Or not ? HONESTLY<3

"You're the HELL I can't live without"
Where were you,
When my heart cried your name?
Where were you,
When my mind was going insane?
Your absence brings me shivers
Your presence haunts me more
My loneliness leads me to your thoughts
And the answers I'm searching for.

The endless pain strikes my heart
Again and Again and Again
And with each breath, I stumble back to the start
This romance has no end.
Will you eventually rescue me?
And whisper the words I have ingrained in my mind?
Or defeat my shattered dreams
and help me realize I've wasted my time?
Am I supposed to feel this way?
Is this what 'love' is all about?
If only you'd believe me when I say,
"You're the hell that I can't live without".

Thanks :D
 
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