Is my Poem any good? Please answer quickly and truthfully!?

[Headshot!]

I cant tell her I love her,
I just get nervous and lose controll,
I cant even be around her,
I never know what to say,
I just wish all this pain would go away,
Will this nightmare ever end,
Will this girl hurt me inside,
I wish that I knew these things,
It doesn’t help when im all alone again…

 

[buddhamiss]

Sounds like a great song lyric - Why not try setting it to music?

 

[nachomanhulk]

Yeah I like it, it's deep and sincere!!!

 

[Hellothere]

I can feel your doubt and fear of rejection by reading this poem. Great poem.