Is my poem any better?

@88y

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Hello Goodbye


This is a hello goodbye, with nothing in between.

I am not alone, I've been made a queen.

I was the princess.. you, a mere PEASANT.
I am the one who really sees you, a PRESENT.

I am the one who sees through it- you're the light in my eye.
You are the one who holds me, as I cry.

You are the one, maybe, you "COMPLETE" me.
It's only a matter of time, please don't run away.. don't leave me.

If you left, I would most definitely die.
Don't think I wouldn't, because, to you, I certainly couldn't tell a lie.

This is a hello goodbye, With nothing in between.

You are the one, you have made life better than any dream.

You are mine; the so-called soulless princess's only gift.
Just stay with me, don't let your heart remain adrift.

Is it good?
What could be fixed?

I'm in seventh grade btw. :)
 
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