Is my poem "A little Dancer" any good?

Tennis chic

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I am 14 and had to write this for a school project. Is it any good?

The Marks on her arms are deadly black
the daughter he loved, He'll never get back.
At her young age she doesn't deserve this
No father should hit only plant her with a kiss.
Her mother looks on but never suspects
she just frowns and never corrects.
The sister she loved and thought would be there
only stands by, brushing her hair.
The teacher knows
but to police she never goes.
Too worried about being called nosy
she'd rather let the girls arms be swollen and rosy.
If only someone would have realized, he could have been found
and their precious daughter wouldn't be laying in the ground.
Her little friend who's lunch he always gave
wouldn't be placing those flowers on her grave.
Next year she was to be eleven
but now shes with God, dancing in heaven.
 
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