Is my novel good so far?

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Gemma L

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Ok so I posted this question early, after I did some minor changes and added some stuff, I am asking again. Anyway here is the prolouge (it isn't really a chapter lol, but, if you want to understand it you have to read it, and it's short too):
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/LizaAndNatasha/356804/

Then here is chapter 1: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/LizaAndNatasha/356825/
enjoy, and thank you!!!!
 
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