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Kate Alex Bahleef
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Keep writing poems. It will help you understand your own feelings and rehearsing word in your mind will make you ready for the day when you can say those words I LOVE YOU and really mean them.
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kyuubi
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ok so i recently just made a poem because i love this girl and shes practically driving me crazy now i made this on my own and i want to know if there's like another poem just like this anyways here's how it goes:
I can't express the way i feel
I can't describe them when your here
i can't stop thinking about you
and i always wanted to say I LOVE YOU
three little words so easy to say
three little words so easy to pronounce
yet when you're here all i can say is
hey how are you...
each day i see you ,i want to
hug you,kiss your forehead and say i love you
you light up my day when i'm down
and you make me smile when i frown
the sad part about this is
i don't have the courage to tell you how i feel
each time i try to tell you how i feel
i fail and i miss my chance to heal
and with this burdened void in my heart
getting larger and larger since the start
i can only wish one day i get the courage
to tell you how i feel and just say....
I LOVE YOU
again i would like to point
out i'm new to this poetry stuff
and i'm only a freshman in high school
if you guys can help make the poem a little better
i still don't know what kinda format this is suppose
to be so if you can help figure that out as well i would appreciate it
oh and the thing about the part wer it says "i miss my chance to heal" it means like heal myself from this burden i carry to tell you how i feel
I can't express the way i feel
I can't describe them when your here
i can't stop thinking about you
and i always wanted to say I LOVE YOU
three little words so easy to say
three little words so easy to pronounce
yet when you're here all i can say is
hey how are you...
each day i see you ,i want to
hug you,kiss your forehead and say i love you
you light up my day when i'm down
and you make me smile when i frown
the sad part about this is
i don't have the courage to tell you how i feel
each time i try to tell you how i feel
i fail and i miss my chance to heal
and with this burdened void in my heart
getting larger and larger since the start
i can only wish one day i get the courage
to tell you how i feel and just say....
I LOVE YOU
again i would like to point
out i'm new to this poetry stuff
and i'm only a freshman in high school
if you guys can help make the poem a little better
i still don't know what kinda format this is suppose
to be so if you can help figure that out as well i would appreciate it
oh and the thing about the part wer it says "i miss my chance to heal" it means like heal myself from this burden i carry to tell you how i feel
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Courtney M
Guest
its kinda original but its cute 
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Sam J
Guest
u don't need to edit one bit. u got everything in rite area. it all great and cute.
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See how they run
Guest
Welcome to poetry. You're not to bad. Girls like guys who write poetry. I do and I'm a woman. I would like this poem. I think it's very sweet. Why don't you read some published poetry to get the feel of how poetry is supposed to be written. I would say go for it. You do have talent now hone it.