In response to news reports that taking aspirin daily can reduce an

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individual's risk of a heart attack, the? there will be...

increase in the quantity demanded of aspirins.

or

increase in the demand for aspirins.
 
They're the same thing, but the first is much wordier.

Most students writing an essay will write a sentence like the first just to sound better and make the essay longer, but teachers/professors really hate wordiness. If the word is unnecessary, they don't want to see it.
 
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