important picture caption for family album, does it look ok?

andrews

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i'm doing an album and need to know if the caption for our pictures sounds ok and has the right spelling.

1.Me and my gorgeous cousin enjoying a little play time together. Our day was perfect; filled with a game of Jenga, eating outside a European Bistro restaurant and ending it with a little bonding time in a phone booth. What a good night!
 
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