imagist poem feedback!!?

Vontavia Smith

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I have to create an imagist poem for English so tell me if this is good bad needs work etc. but don't be negative just to be a butt hole.. "from birth a miracle to all. helplessly falling into your protectors arms seeking comfort, love, affection. stubbornly stuck in childish ways not knowing what it's like to be reprimanded. growing to soon before my eyes to one day impact anothers life." ok and go at it lol
 
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