i'm writing this book and this is the beginning. do you think it sounds interesting.?

luz

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A young girl.......no one ever knew what old she really was but this girl was special.She could see things someone like you could not, hear things no one can. Do things you'd never think was possible. She was different,abnormal and endorsed oddity, a mutant of some kind her name was Neona. Some people describe her evil some describe her great. But her story is powerful...and this is her story.


It all started on a stormy night, high winds, heavy rain, thunder and lightening. It was a sight to see, it was so extraordinary that even meteorologist couldn’t explain what was going on. But I…....I could feel that something bad was going to happen. I was only fifteen when this happened. Everything stopped and out of no where something began to emerge from the clouds. It was small at first but the closer it got the bigger. What ever It was it was huge, I could hear my mother calling me to return to the house but I couldn’t move. I had to know what was happening. what was it, why is it her, a million questions running through my mind. Then it started to depart from the ground but…It went up and up until I could see it no more. I sighed, relived that nothing he happened. But…it left some thing behind a metal box. My mother was now begging me to come inside. I put my ear to the box and it sound like a mysterious cry. I wanted to open ot but i knew if i took it on the house my mother would not like me to open it. So I picked it up and ran into the barn. My mother called after me “Astra” ”Astra”. That’s my name, it means The Stars…. I ran as fast as I could and slammed the barn door shut. When I opened the box there light bursed from inside it nearly blinded. It got cold and the storm started up again but this time even worse. It sounded a if the barn would collapse. I was scared until I seen what was in the metal box. It was a baby. But she didn’t look like a normal baby. Its eyes were of no color as in clear, it’s skin was not black nor white but a very light grey, hair looked smooth as silk. After examining the baby I looked at the metal box trying to get some type of information r answer as to why this baby was here…but I found nothing. So I picked the baby up and it was hallow nearly felt like nothing was there. Then I noticed on her hand. It had a picture of the moon and letters, N-E-O-N-A. Neona it spelled I, figured it was a type of birth mark but since her name was anonymous I figured that would be her name. Neona I said loud and when I said it the clouds turned white. The rain stopped the sun began t shine and the baby was sound asleep. I was no longer scared but now petrified didn’t no if something was really happening or if it was just luck, but I had bigger problems than that or at least I thought did. I could not leave this baby here alone different or not. But I could not bring her to my mother for I knew not of what she would say. I thought it was the end of the world but It was really the beginning of my cipher life.
 
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