I'm writing a book and I need help?

  • Thread starter Thread starter Amanda
  • Start date Start date
A

Amanda

Guest
I am writing a book about a girl and how her dad beats her and that her only friend helps her and she ends up falling in love with him. I only got 17 pages done but i want to publish a book that is like 400 pages!!!! or atleast 250! i just need some new events. Help!
 
OK. In all honesty, your plot sounds a little weak---if you can't think of a storyline on your own, you probably won't make even 30 pages.
 
maybe her friend should find out about the abuse on his own instead of being told
maybe you should include meeting her friend and their relationship developing
you should also start with something bad happening to the dad so the reader can almost sympathise with him

I'd recommend you post the story so far on this so we can give feedback
 
I'm writing scripts just now for some small comedy, And i could give you some advice try and extend the scene as much a possible like express feeling setting's make sure every character is described and bedroom where ever she is being abused any other family pets. "Or you could start the story off like really nice home family friends and so on then she wakes up to her reality" =] but may not be best advice as i write small COMEDY episodes like 15 min stuff just now got a meeting with them soon =]
 
great idea!
but..i mean you really should of posted some of what youve written so far. i really dont know how to help.
 
Hello! Well, I honestly don't know where you are at with this story of yours. Could you send me a few pages, and I will give you my feed back? Thanks. -M. email me. [email protected]
 
Back
Top