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okay so its actually going to be a paragraph in the book, the book about a little girl whos eight at the beggining of the book, she gets tosted from foster parents to foster parent and finds herself getting abused, im naming the book eternal BLURB HERE --------------------------------> I lay cripled on the concrete floor tossing turning hoping for a hero but the pain is unbearable. I stutter my breaths waiting for my lungs to collapse " havent i been though enough" i whisper hoping for it to come out as a screem but no im too weak by body cant take the punishment i try getting up, its impossible i cant risk breaking more bones. so there i lay, hoping for a hero.
i understand spelling and punctuation sucks kayy
i didnt actually copy this out of the book itself i know it off by heart so quickly wrote it down. in the book its all corrected. just emagine somebody saying it to you
I lay, crippled on the concrete floor. Tossing turning hoping for a hero, but the pain is unbearable. I stutter my breaths waiting for my lungs to collapse. "Haven't i been through enough?" i whisper hoping for it to come out as a scream. But no, im too weak. My body couldn't possibly take the punishment. I try getting up, its impossible and i cant risk breaking more bones. So there i lay, hoping for a hero.
im not using the word alas.. thats just. no im young too hahahahahah bet you wouldnt have guessed im 12 now would you
I lay, crippled on the concrete floor. Tossing turning hoping for a hero, but the pain is unbearable. I stutter my breaths waiting for my lungs to collapse. "Haven't i been through enough?" i whisper hoping for it to come out as a scream. But no, im too weak. My body can't possibly take the punishment. Im trying to get up, its impossible and i cant risk breaking more bones. So there i lay, hoping for a hero.
i understand spelling and punctuation sucks kayy
i didnt actually copy this out of the book itself i know it off by heart so quickly wrote it down. in the book its all corrected. just emagine somebody saying it to you
I lay, crippled on the concrete floor. Tossing turning hoping for a hero, but the pain is unbearable. I stutter my breaths waiting for my lungs to collapse. "Haven't i been through enough?" i whisper hoping for it to come out as a scream. But no, im too weak. My body couldn't possibly take the punishment. I try getting up, its impossible and i cant risk breaking more bones. So there i lay, hoping for a hero.
im not using the word alas.. thats just. no im young too hahahahahah bet you wouldnt have guessed im 12 now would you
I lay, crippled on the concrete floor. Tossing turning hoping for a hero, but the pain is unbearable. I stutter my breaths waiting for my lungs to collapse. "Haven't i been through enough?" i whisper hoping for it to come out as a scream. But no, im too weak. My body can't possibly take the punishment. Im trying to get up, its impossible and i cant risk breaking more bones. So there i lay, hoping for a hero.