I'm testing out third person for my new novel... should I continue?

Lacey

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With his feet trampling in the puddles on the cobblestone street, Nicholas Amos felt the adrenaline rushing through his body as he ran. Lightening was flashing in the distance, illuminating the sky as a bright as the sun. Eyes focused, legs leaping forward, he felt the distance between them growing with each passing step. A sense of déjà vu overtook him as he rounded the corner of the alley, a thunderous crack exploding in the sky.
 
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