need improvement? Her gentle words were spoken like
the fresh and quiet breath of heaven
Washing from a withered earth
the dead and vanquished senses.
From her sweetness flowed the river
That ran again in me, from the dead
and frozen waste in my disheveled soul
Her voice alone awakened.
As her words kept flowing the river
inside kept growing sweeping me
dreamily on a journey through heaven.
The moment she stopped speaking
The heavens answered by shutting
their flowered gates to my presence.
Oh beautiful maiden speak once more
do not deprive me of your essence
What can I do please let me know
to invoke your smile which contents me so
So that I wouldn't need to live another day
For to heaven I would be taken.
the fresh and quiet breath of heaven
Washing from a withered earth
the dead and vanquished senses.
From her sweetness flowed the river
That ran again in me, from the dead
and frozen waste in my disheveled soul
Her voice alone awakened.
As her words kept flowing the river
inside kept growing sweeping me
dreamily on a journey through heaven.
The moment she stopped speaking
The heavens answered by shutting
their flowered gates to my presence.
Oh beautiful maiden speak once more
do not deprive me of your essence
What can I do please let me know
to invoke your smile which contents me so
So that I wouldn't need to live another day
For to heaven I would be taken.