so i know I'm not far at all yet, but this is giving me trouble. even in a good mood i don't understand my own brain. I'm depressed at the moment, so my mind is like a maze on a battlefield during a hurricane, and I'm trapped in it. it feels like now i cant even enjoy good music without moping over her... so instead I'm writing this. well anyways, here is what i have:
I dig myself out yet find myself deeper
this hole that I am in now a little bit steeper
like quicksand, slowly devouring my feet
but I'm not yet ready to allow my defeat
years pass, or seconds, no one can be sure
I scarcely remember the suns warm allure
yup... thats all i have. i got some possible endings, but i don't know what to do for the bulk of the middle. might as well share the possible endings too
1) he/she allows him/herself to just keep on going down, then finds something at the bottom(truth and happiness? who knows)
2)he/she simply finds a way out
3)he/she is simply stuck there for eternity
now on to what type of responses I'm looking for. if anyone wants to troll me, ill take it, but at least make it funny or ironic or something, but I'm just looking for something that could happen, something maybe that i could describe in detail. i do NOT want something like "look in your heart" because if you read the first part of this, i have, and it is not pretty. fire away
I dig myself out yet find myself deeper
this hole that I am in now a little bit steeper
like quicksand, slowly devouring my feet
but I'm not yet ready to allow my defeat
years pass, or seconds, no one can be sure
I scarcely remember the suns warm allure
yup... thats all i have. i got some possible endings, but i don't know what to do for the bulk of the middle. might as well share the possible endings too
1) he/she allows him/herself to just keep on going down, then finds something at the bottom(truth and happiness? who knows)
2)he/she simply finds a way out
3)he/she is simply stuck there for eternity
now on to what type of responses I'm looking for. if anyone wants to troll me, ill take it, but at least make it funny or ironic or something, but I'm just looking for something that could happen, something maybe that i could describe in detail. i do NOT want something like "look in your heart" because if you read the first part of this, i have, and it is not pretty. fire away