I'm going to start a book about the result of nuclear war and i need to

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know what people think of the prologue? here is a small section of the prologue for you to read

America and Korea had finally gone to war, and as a result the world was bombed all over by their huge arsenal of nuclear warheads, but for a small city along the coast of Papua New Guinea, the citizens of Harvensberg were preparing for something big to happen. The United Nations funded the construction of several military bunkers that were made deep underground to defend it from nuclear blasts. These military bunkers were created in several cities to protect the right amount of people from nuclear blasts if there was ever a nuclear war. Most people were escorted to the bunkers safely, others… were not so lucky. These not so lucky ones were infected with extremely deadly radiation poisoning which was so strong that it could kill them in a matter of minutes, The radiation poisoning fused together with the human body and made a deadly infection which was highly contagious, it would make your skin very flaky and you would start to feel nauseas. You would then lose all of your memories and become a “monster” that resembles a primate like creature. Many of the military bunkers all over the world were overcome by these mutated humans (which were named “the stalkers” because they were so stealthy) and destroyed for safety reasons. Now only four of these bunkers remain...

what do you think?
 
Alright but it seems you've copyed stalkers have been used in many zombie like movies and i wouldn't bother theres already enough books about that stuff but it sounds alright
 
It sounds interesting and definitely has some promise but the way it is worded it reads more like someone's review or description of the book than the prologue. It does make me want to know more about the story but it doesn't sound like part of the story. Good Luck!
 
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