I'm 11 and I write stories. Think I have a shot of becoming an author?

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Here's a paragraph I'm coming up with off the top of my head...

The sky darkened and Michelle closed her eyes and held her hands high. The rumble of the thunder shook the ground as minuscule bursts of energy crackled through the ground. Clouds slowly spun overhead as an elephant trunk tornado formed. She opened her eyes and turned as she watched her lowly farm house being swept up by the wind. It took a lot of guts, but Michelle felt totally at peace.
 
It's a good paragraph, very descriptive. Nobody would feel at peace with a tornado write above them unless they were committing suicide.
 
It's a good paragraph, very descriptive. Nobody would feel at peace with a tornado write above them unless they were committing suicide.
 
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