Iambic pentameter my poem PLEASE?

matrix1516

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How can spring break be so suddenly soon,
Stuck in a shit-hole while thinking of you.
For one shall not wait until a blue moon,
To return again or I say adieu.

Away from the one I love so dearly,
I party hard, for there’s no returning.
But listen baby, I ask you merely,
Forget me not, for I shall be yearning.

Question me not, for you will be missed,
I'll wish for you upon every night's star
Remembering just the last time we kissed,
Your absence will leave the worst of all scars

Lift your head to watch the stars up above;
You will return to a shower of love,
 
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