I Wrote this song, what do you think?

Sarawr

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Opinion?
It's called
'I was going to give you a flower but I ate it'

Verse 1..
Sitting in a tree, thinking of you and me,
I really really miss you,
I really want to kiss you.
I love you more than a fat kid loves cake,
I took my heart out for you to take.
I love you more than a vampire loves blood,
Why don't we both go play in the mud?

Chorus..
I was meant to give you a flower for making my day,
But I accidently ate it for lunch on my way,
I hope this problem doesn't ruin your day.
I guess I should give you another one,
Another day, when I'm not hungry.

Verse 2..
We are closer then peas in a pod
Guess what I'm listening to on my iPod?
It's a song i wrote for you and it goes like this.

Chorus..
I was meant to give you a flower for making my day,
But I accidently ate it for lunch on my way,
I hope this problem doesn't ruin your day.
I guess I should give you another one,
Another day, when I'm not hungry.

Verse 3...
That's right, I wrote this corny song, just for you.
I hope it doesn't make you spew.
Let's listen to the chorus one more time
because it has my favourite rhyme.

Chorus...
I was meant to give you a flower for making my day,
But I accidently ate it for lunch on my way,
I hope this problem doesn't ruin your day.
I guess I should give you another one,
Another day, when I'm not hungry.


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So yea, i know, it's weird, just tell me what you think ;)
 
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