im sure you'll find a few parts that dont rhyme so well, i need a few pointers from a good poet, im presenting the first batch of lyrics to my band tomorrow,
its screamo so when its in capitals im screaming.
I know that your crying, but your dying inside, lying like fox in lambs hide,
Theres nothing more adorable the that face that you hide
Let me in… let me out,
Let me in… let me out,
I fall not once but I fall twice to these lies
Bring it together, bring it back
Just like a mother dressed in black
I see you in the cold
Frail freeing
LET ME IN LET ME OUT!
LET ME IN LET ME OUT!
(GROWL)
LEET MEE OUUTTT
Lets call for war
This will never end, Not even until thee end
It never does, Iv never won. If I could only
Speak threw the ax left threw my bones
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
OH I WANT OUT I WANT IN I COULD NEVER LIVE WITHOUT SIN
IAM HUMAN IAM ONE I CAN NOT BE LEFT UNDONE I SAW YOU
ONCE I WISHED UPON TWICE IF ONLY I COULD ROLL THE DICE
MY LOVE GROWS STRONG AND THEN YOUR DONE
Oh and your done…
LET ME INNNNNNN
LET ME OUTTTTTT
WITHOUT A DOUGHBT
IM NOT AROUND!
Leave me alone for I am dead And your already ahead
There was a time
Far long past ago
I was a young boy on the edge,You where a young girl with a Heart made of lead.I watched my shadows You kept a forward head You understood I never had to write a song for you I never had to draw picture you understood, oh you just understand and now that your gone.. a piece of me has died forever gone you know I could never rise.
Somewhere deep laid within
You seemed to care but I
Could never be there
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
i handle criticism well, and let me know how my rhyming is for a beginner?
its screamo so when its in capitals im screaming.
I know that your crying, but your dying inside, lying like fox in lambs hide,
Theres nothing more adorable the that face that you hide
Let me in… let me out,
Let me in… let me out,
I fall not once but I fall twice to these lies
Bring it together, bring it back
Just like a mother dressed in black
I see you in the cold
Frail freeing
LET ME IN LET ME OUT!
LET ME IN LET ME OUT!
(GROWL)
LEET MEE OUUTTT
Lets call for war
This will never end, Not even until thee end
It never does, Iv never won. If I could only
Speak threw the ax left threw my bones
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
OH I WANT OUT I WANT IN I COULD NEVER LIVE WITHOUT SIN
IAM HUMAN IAM ONE I CAN NOT BE LEFT UNDONE I SAW YOU
ONCE I WISHED UPON TWICE IF ONLY I COULD ROLL THE DICE
MY LOVE GROWS STRONG AND THEN YOUR DONE
Oh and your done…
LET ME INNNNNNN
LET ME OUTTTTTT
WITHOUT A DOUGHBT
IM NOT AROUND!
Leave me alone for I am dead And your already ahead
There was a time
Far long past ago
I was a young boy on the edge,You where a young girl with a Heart made of lead.I watched my shadows You kept a forward head You understood I never had to write a song for you I never had to draw picture you understood, oh you just understand and now that your gone.. a piece of me has died forever gone you know I could never rise.
Somewhere deep laid within
You seemed to care but I
Could never be there
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
LET ME OUT LET ME IN!
i handle criticism well, and let me know how my rhyming is for a beginner?