I wrote this poem! tell me what you think!?

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Faith

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He said she said

He told her forever
she said yea right
He said nah for real
she said boy you tight
He said that shes his girl
the one he wants to be with
when hes with his thugs shes the one he thinks of
she said he keeps it real and that she admires
but his boys say hes just playing around that he dont mean what he says
he said hes done with the game
because he already won
the one girl he loves.
 
Its okay- a few little bits and pieces, what do you think of THIS:
life is like a winding road
it takes you where you need to go
there are twists and turns that you must take
along that winding road

life is like and endless sky
you don't know where you don't know why
your trying not to make mistakes
in that endless sky

life is like a flowing stream
one day a laugh one day a scream
you must give and you must take
along that flowing stream

life is like a melody
or maybe like a growing tree

there were two more lines after growing tree but i forget the rest! :( :)
 
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