I wrote this poem? Analyze it please?

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cristelle R

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What do you think it is about? I like to see what people think certain poems are bout...just curious

touch my hands
kiss my lips
kneel down
with your halo on
close my eyes
pretend you're there
brush my face with your
ghostly trace
stop on by
while i sleep
insert dream here
make it clear
visit me
angel guide
stay a while
make me smile
your spirit lingers
your incense smell
i 'll send you off
into the ocean rough
but spirit you stay
body you go
spirit you remain
my lover Dane
 
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