i wrote this poem after going to hume lake and seeing the cloudy tips of the

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sierra nevada during winter? how does it sound? yet again another of my lesser poems but i'd like opinions nonetheless...

Blissful Mountaintops

Oh Blissful Mountain Tops standing over trees
Reflection off your shadows light and
Beckoning to the seas

Oh Blissful Mountain Tops touching heavens end
Cascading off your icy steeps
My soulful heart to send

Oh Blissful Mountain Tops from the earth you came
And with the sun you
Took its life for moon to tame

Oh Blissful Mountain Tops like a laying lord
Making hills your servants
So they can feel your sword

Oh Blissful Mountain Tops, over frozen lake
From everything’s eyes
You are the awe to take
 
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