I wrote this kinda poem and kinda play? do you like it?

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Don Bernardino

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Characters:

People
Army
Tsuny the tsunami
Hurry the hurricane
Torny the tornado
Floody the floodwater
Muddy the mudslide
Earthy the earthquake

Story:

Earthy came first and shook me up.
Tsuny came next and surfed me up.
Floody came third and drowned us out.
Muddy came fourth and took our house.
Hurry showed up and gave birth to Torny.
Army came and said you People are wimps.

People said "Army supposed to help us out."
"Dummys I'm Army armegeddon ha ha.
Who here has not sinned?
Liars! it's to late for you!
You said no when you heard the bells,
Sunday. Now it's to late! go to hell!"

This is a good moral.
 
Hmmn, i like it but i don't fully understand the meaning. Is it about how if something bad happens the army doesn't give a crap? But i do like nice flow.
 
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