I wrote a song is it good or not?

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What kind of song should it be like a ballad or like rock or country

It's 7' oclock, in the morning, begging you to wake up, oh wake up, oh please wake up..... I lost a friend today or a heart attack no they weren't fat just skinny as me... I lost someone I loved!! this won't ever fade away.....

(CHORUS) I am so ashamed, was this my fault.. did I say something, could I have done something sooner I miss her, I guess you'll never know... that I loved you soo.. yeah I loved you so..

The next day, is, is .. school.. today is not the day, my parents drove me to the infront of my school, I walked the other way... I'm sorry I ditched today... I've been thinking of you.. like was this my fault... am I the one to blame...you will stay in my head.... you'll never go away...and you will never fade... you are there to stay...
I loved how we loved everything... we shared anything.. we even shared all our jewelery.... and all the lame clothes we wore.
I would write more but I'm too lazy.. rate please..

i just wrote it like a few minutes ago.. lol
 
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